This is my first draft. Can anyone please edit my nomination paper?
Essay Question: Why do you want to attend a U.S. Service Academy?
Every since elementary, I always wanted to attend an U.S. Service Academy, because I believe an U.S. Service Academy will provide me the opportunity to grow physically and mentally, while also giving me the chance to help others in need. During my primitive years in elementary, life was tough. My parents were financially struggling, and I...
Can anyone please edit my nomination paper?
Essay Question: Why do you want to attend a U.S. Service Academy?
Every since elementary, I always wanted to attend an U.S. Service Academy, because I believe an U.S. Service Academy will provide me the opportunity to grow physically and mentally, while also giving me the chance to help others in need. During my primitive years in elementary, life was tough. My parents were financially struggling, and I...
Can anyone please edit my nomination paper?