I need help trimming my personal statement for the USNA. I'm currently at 1180 word count, but I need to get down to 500 words. Please help!
Many people think of a vacation whenever the word “beach” comes to mind. However, I am not one of those people. To me, when I think of a beach, pictures of marching in the sand, assaulting a beachhead, and forging a brotherhood with the people beside me flood my mind. The Navy and Marine Corps come to mind whenever my “beach picture” pops into my...
Trimming the personal statement
Many people think of a vacation whenever the word “beach” comes to mind. However, I am not one of those people. To me, when I think of a beach, pictures of marching in the sand, assaulting a beachhead, and forging a brotherhood with the people beside me flood my mind. The Navy and Marine Corps come to mind whenever my “beach picture” pops into my...
Trimming the personal statement